RIM's Review of RIM's Review of Dicmatized: Sexcapades Volume 1: The Doctor Is in! by Dyphia

RIM's Review of Dicmatized: Sexcapades Volume 1: The Doctor Is In! by Dyphia

 RIM's Review of

Dicmatized: Sexcapades Volume 1: The Doctor Is in! by Dyphia

Dr. Lenese Stringfield Puts the "Sex" in Sex Therapy as she takes the profession by storm with her new and innovative techniques. Her seductive nature and sexy demeanor has her clients eating out of the palm of her hand; amongst other things. Lenese has loved once and lost. So, if she can't be with the one she loves; she will love the one she's with. But, amazing sex doesn't come without a price tag. Too bad life has a lesson to teach this freaky therapist! She will soon learn that Karma is the 'one bitch' that has everyone's address. Fooling around with another woman's husband is dangerous, but falling in love with one can be deadly.

I was told that it takes about eight seconds for a reader to decide if they want to read a book, that decision is based on the cover itself and the description on the back jacket cover. The author, Dyphia’s description (above) entices potential readers to pick up her novel, grab a snack and settle down for a good read. Unfortunately the description isn’t enough to keep the reader engaged or want to read something else by the author if they find themselves having to choose between continuing with the story or putting the book down. That is the position that I found myself in while reading this novel.

 It is quite obvious that this author doesn’t take her craft seriously; the story was poorly edited, with several missed opportunities for grammatical and formatting corrections. The story could be a future contender if the author takes the time to invest in professional editing and maybe take the advice that her characters are too busy and there is too much going on at one time. With some coaching, and the realization that sharing multiple storylines in one novel can take away from the main characters plot.

I truly believe that I could have enjoyed this story a lot better if I didn’t have to spend my time editing or trying to figure out if text was the character actually speaking or a thought.

I can’t with a good conscience and loyalty to the literary world, recommend this novel in its current state. 

Rating: 1 star

Reviewed By:

D.P. Winston

For Readers In Motion Bookclub